Monday, June 8, 2015

A Guiding Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

She dances as the sun shines through her grimy window,
It's dazzling light highlighting her petite body,
With her hair tied up with a ragged bow,
She looks like a waif of the cold, cruel streets of Dublin,
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Hazel Durham
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Mihaela Pirjol 17 October 2018

This is wonderful a poem on hope and salvation. There is always a guiding light in life; there is always someone for every one. A heart-warming poem!

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Lyn Paul 26 June 2015

Beautiful words expressing the routine of survival.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2015

Death had entered her life early, Darkness invading her youth unfairly, She plays with imaginary lovers merrily, They all want to win her heart, The poetess is well aware of human psychology, it happens with all of us. A nice poem...................10

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Lyn Paul 17 June 2015

A beautiful heartfelt write full of hope. We forget how fortunate we are with a roof over our heads. Simply wonderful words.

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Ramesh Rai 14 June 2015

Life is twisted at every fold, neverthless it propagates being bold.

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Valsa George 10 June 2015

Into a life devoid of purpose and the right orientation, when a kind person comes with the largesse of heart to forgive and lavish love without limits, there happens a sweet change that offers one butterfly wings! Great write Hazel!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2015

A poem with excellent phraseology and guiding light nicely presented. I like very much. Thanks for posting.

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 June 2015

there will be a guiding light for the people who strives alone

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