A Guide Into Heaven Comments

Beautiful poem....The last two lines are very meaningful and uplift the whole poem.

a well expressed poem... just lovely..

Lovely piece, whilst short- it truly speaks to the reader. Good Job :)

I love this lines Cheers... Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

good envious world of you, Suzan! the two lines commencing' those birds' are richly poetic...10/10 come to my in box...

profound in theme, excellent

Love the complexity of both the spoken and unspoken content of your work! Good luck with the book and life onwards! Neil

Suzan, That feels obviously religious and at the same time quite observant, faith means having faith sometimes against the grain, ... and sometimes with it. I see both here, and that is good. B.V.A.

guide to heaven....still far from me....very far.... Good write! !

Nice write, reading this poem makes me think about good things...just good things: -)

Very nice. You should make a guide book out of this to heaven.

Excellent job. Thanks, Suzan.

Hi Suzan, thanks for your lovely poem, I have enjoyed it. Mylovepoet.

Brilliant enjoyed it alot great write nice one kindest Regards Ricky

I love the 'Heavenly' picture you've painted, beautiful and serene! This is a place we all should hope to call our home in the afterlife. Excellent job! Beth

what a nice poem, wonderful world -topmark

Your life seems like a nice place to be (jealous) 10 regards Chris