While I'm sitting pretty
Indulging in all luxury
Lavishing in style
My life has never been vile
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Lovely piece, whilst short- it truly speaks to the reader. Good Job :)
I love this lines Cheers... Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990
good envious world of you, Suzan! the two lines commencing' those birds' are richly poetic...10/10 come to my in box...
Love the complexity of both the spoken and unspoken content of your work! Good luck with the book and life onwards! Neil
Suzan, That feels obviously religious and at the same time quite observant, faith means having faith sometimes against the grain, ... and sometimes with it. I see both here, and that is good. B.V.A.
guide to heaven....still far from me....very far.... Good write! !
Nice write, reading this poem makes me think about good things...just good things: -)
Hi Suzan, thanks for your lovely poem, I have enjoyed it. Mylovepoet.
Brilliant enjoyed it alot great write nice one kindest Regards Ricky
I love the 'Heavenly' picture you've painted, beautiful and serene! This is a place we all should hope to call our home in the afterlife. Excellent job! Beth
Your life seems like a nice place to be (jealous) 10 regards Chris
Beautiful poem....The last two lines are very meaningful and uplift the whole poem.