You are sitting on the bank of a lake,
Engaged in fishing and smoking with silence,
You are not interested in a particular fish,
Depending entirely on your fate for the day.
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ALL WOMEN Are very intelligent like once were guys all love to wish a while when they find one they are wise both gals and guys now a a days condomise
Beautiful poem......................................................
Interesting, poem from a male perspective, however women fish also and we will throw the snake back...Looking forward to reading the girls poem.....
Very thoughtful and erudite, reflects the practical side of the man woman relationships. Thanks.
Dear Bro, It is a very expressive poem with the flow of thoughts. Thanks for your words of appreciation about my poem.
Nice and interesting.........and it is the truth about the fish who is figuratively talks about the girls
very nice and inspiring..... loved it thanks for the advice anyway :) even though i don't really sense i'm meant by it but thanks in the name of others :) You've got some beautiful poems here.. keep it up - GoodLuck GuessWho
Of cause what resides in the lake is a mystery to our eyes and understanding.
I am a boy but I am not like this. All the five fingers are not of same size.
An intense, deep write and obviously holds truth in its obscure verses.... 'If I am not wrong, fish is compared to a girl........If I am right, then surely, we 'Boys' surely want a girl for us, not really to soothe our heart but to satisfy our temptation............. A realistic write Uncle! .........and not to miss, hats off to your speed.......
All young guys ' ur age ' love fish any one would do under the cover of darkness all are alike as we quench.... we all did and You continue
unlike the guide for the girls, this one is composed with subtlety.
You are hungry and thirsty/Just need a fish/Being called by instinct/Whether moral or immoral...pragmatic expression sir! A wonderful poem..........................Full score!