Tuesday, April 29, 2014

A Guide For Boys In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are sitting on the bank of a lake,
Engaged in fishing and smoking with silence,
You are not interested in a particular fish,
Depending entirely on your fate for the day.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2020

You are hungry and thirsty/Just need a fish/Being called by instinct/Whether moral or immoral...pragmatic expression sir! A wonderful poem..........................Full score!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 August 2018

ALL WOMEN Are very intelligent like once were guys all love to wish a while when they find one they are wise both gals and guys now a a days condomise

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 August 2017

Beautiful poem......................................................

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Melvina Germain 04 November 2015

Interesting, poem from a male perspective, however women fish also and we will throw the snake back...Looking forward to reading the girls poem.....

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Rajnish Manga 28 March 2015

Very thoughtful and erudite, reflects the practical side of the man woman relationships. Thanks.

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 January 2015

An interesting write............................10

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V P Mahur 25 June 2014

Dear Bro, It is a very expressive poem with the flow of thoughts. Thanks for your words of appreciation about my poem.

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Piumi Wijenayake 28 May 2014

Nice and interesting.........and it is the truth about the fish who is figuratively talks about the girls

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Guess Who 19 May 2014

very nice and inspiring..... loved it thanks for the advice anyway :) even though i don't really sense i'm meant by it but thanks in the name of others :) You've got some beautiful poems here.. keep it up - GoodLuck GuessWho

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Matthias Pantaleon 15 May 2014

Of cause what resides in the lake is a mystery to our eyes and understanding.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 May 2014

Thanks for sharing this poem as well...

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Sarmad Mirza 11 May 2014

I am a boy but I am not like this. All the five fingers are not of same size.

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Yash Shinde 29 April 2014

An intense, deep write and obviously holds truth in its obscure verses.... 'If I am not wrong, fish is compared to a girl........If I am right, then surely, we 'Boys' surely want a girl for us, not really to soothe our heart but to satisfy our temptation............. A realistic write Uncle! .........and not to miss, hats off to your speed.......

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2017

All young guys ' ur age ' love fish any one would do under the cover of darkness all are alike as we quench.... we all did and You continue

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 April 2014

unlike the guide for the girls, this one is composed with subtlety.

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