Monday, July 8, 2013

A Guest Comments

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Walking among hundreds of men
Unknown faces, the voices strange
He looked at each, strange as a stranger
Heard voices, unfamiliar
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Jahan Zeb
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 July 2013

A nice narrative and u built it up super well! A guest is like an angel n needs another angel. Pls do review my fasting poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 July 2013

Good poem...... come be my guest..have rest..........well read.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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