Monday, September 5, 2016

A Grocery List Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ice cream for when you remember back then,
Stomach-aching foods to feel something again
Plenty of water, replace the tears you've cried
When life kicked you down or a loved one died
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Daniel Pace
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Tom Billsborough 07 September 2016

If someone mentions Ice Cream I automatically go for the 10! But I won't let that sway me. This poem shows your deep empathy for a friend. Whoever he or she is, is lucky to have you as a friend. It is good to convince someone that they are not alone with their problems. This is a very good poem and I'm going to put it on my favourites' list.

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