Sunday, May 28, 2006

A Grizzly Dream- Fun Comments

Rating: 5.0

The other night I retired to bed and had a crazy dream
That I was walking on the beach when I heard an awesome scream
Standing right before me was a great brown grizzly bear
wearing a tu-tu and a basque and a ribbon in her hair
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
COMMENTS
Melvina Germain 30 August 2007

I agree with David and I love this little poem, it's nice to see humour in poems every now and then and not always the serious side or doom and gloom. This is truly and up poem, thanks for sharing Lisa.--Melvina--

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David Harris 30 March 2007

Lisa, this is a quirky funny poem. Your humour is as quirky as mine. I loved this. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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billy bob 28 June 2006

i loved it what more 2 say? ? ? .. one of the best 'funny poems'.. ive read... KEEP WRTING DONT STOP.. bcuz i will be here..2 comment on many of themm so u will see my name many a times: -) debbie: -) *KEEP WRITING*- (a message from kays cuzin)

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Brian Dorn 24 June 2006

Lisa, great ending to a hysterical poem... well done! ! Brian

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Scarlett Treat 20 June 2006

T'was this a dream-or a nightmare-but wait, that horse belongs in another story! Very funny, esp. the picture you paint of Kay, the Dancing Queen!

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Deanna More 02 June 2006

.. What a delightful way to end a day! I'll be chuckling in my sleep! This poem's ending was a hilarious surprise. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. Very original, too! (10 points for you!) Dee xx ..

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OMG that was heaps good. Where do you get this stuff? you are heaps funny.

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Jerry Hughes 28 May 2006

A grizzly bear wearing a tu-tu? This I've got to see. Good fun...

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Duncan Wyllie 28 May 2006

Yes YES YES! ! ! ! If laughter be our gardens needs then take another of Lisa's reads What fun! Love Duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2006

What fun! Laughter is sometimes the best medicine for all our ills. Warm regards, Sandra

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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