Sunday, June 24, 2012

A Grief Earned, Upon A Lover Leaving, Elegiac Intonations - Beginning & Ending With Lines From Shelley Comments

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for Vajra, after Krsna

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'Here, on one fountain of a mourning mind'
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Mark Normand 29 July 2012

You have a unique style and a certain taste for subject matter that gives your writing a character unlike many who write poetry. It is well defined and not often emulated I am sure and I would be at a loss to say whose style you could be imitating. Not that I believe you are imitating anyone I am just saying that after reading several of your poems it would not be hard to recognize your style and know you wrote something after I read it. You write well and and have moved on from simply writing words to convey meaning, to writing that uses words to create art. Words that follow the full spectrum of color that are defined by emotions from happy to sad the same as they many colors from white to black. Nice job.

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