Friday, March 4, 2005

! A Grief Ago Comments

Rating: 2.9

'There is no grief
which time does not lessen
or soften' -
so said Cicero, a man so often right;
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Michael Shepherd
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Varsha M 05 March 2021

until the time - 'a grief ago' as Dylan wrote - the cupboard opened only for love's sake without grief...: those carefully folded memories brought out and loved and lived a while...even i agree for this

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Varsha M 05 March 2021

Sir this is profound. Life often entraps us in grief cups willing to never empty up. Yet we live lifedrenched and drowned in it. Beautifully said.

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Indira Renganathan 05 March 2021

Lovely poem on grief beautifully crafted....5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2019

A most beautiful poem, but tad too sad. Loveliest worded, melancholy layered. Grief is oft melancholy perpetually. Loveliest told.

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Adeline Foster 10 January 2014

Ah! A grief and then despair. Or need it be? Such questions. Such answers I, too, explore in – Eternal Grief - Adeline

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 22 February 2012

Very nice mr micheal....a grief ago...kudos, u r very good... Please i will luv for you to read a few of my poems...esp do not despair at the death of the light.... And leave a comment/criticism too i will appreciate it...thanks for sharing

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Eric Cockrell 03 September 2011

we are born grieving, and find our very meaning there... great poem!

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Dave Walker 12 August 2011

Like the poem. Have a look at child in your arms. I wrote it for my sister. Best wishes Dave

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Fay Slimm 21 August 2008

Never say ' I grieved once', truly the memory of grief will resurrect the feel of it once again. Almost as lasting as the reference E.lizabeth Barret-Browning made to never saying 'I loved once'. There is an eternity surrounding the both.The emotion is captured in your piece most fervently. Fay.

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Rochelle Cashdan 18 May 2008

I'll remember both the image of the bulbs and the thought.

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Rochelle Cashdan 18 May 2008

I'm another person who liked the part about 'the bulbs... becoming at last themselves', both as poetry and as a thought to muse on. Thanks.

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Sandra Osborne 06 February 2008

Wow. This is really great. A departure from your earlier work from years ago, and I love it very much. The literary references are the cherry on top. Great to read you again - love, Sandra

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Martin Zarrop 02 December 2006

I love the imagery, particularly in the 5th stanza. It spoke to my own recent loss. Thank you.

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Melvina Germain 14 October 2006

Michael this is an excellent poem, very well said. Thankyou--Melvina---

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Esther Leclerc 28 July 2006

The poem entire speaks volumes but the fifth stanza is mine. Thank you so much for this graceful, grace-ful write...

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Alison Cassidy 17 July 2006

You've done it again Michael Shepherd...Shown me what I know, but so much more than what I know. 'Gently, gently folded in the cupboards of the heart' tears me apart... And yet, your poem reassures me at the same time.

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Nalini Hebbar 03 July 2006

i haven' t read a more beautiful poem on poethunter....emmm...nor in any book...i havent read much...but from what i have...this one found a way into my mind and heart...stirred up some old grief maybe...can you believe it? ...i read it 4 times...and loved it more each time i read it...thank you for the feeling you generated...love...nalini

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Jerry Hughes 22 June 2006

One word - stunning!

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Wow....you did it, Michael....I am speechless.

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Susan Mnaphi-cakana 17 May 2006

What a beautiful poem. I wish I could also fold my grief neatly and store it away for future reference, but without grief

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