Wednesday, December 21, 2011

A Green Poem In Jerusalem Comments

Rating: 5.0

in the beginning..
it was a colour,
a colour decided to be a poem
and it was.
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ahmed khaled
COMMENTS
Josephine Collett 13 November 2014

beautiful sense of freshness and vitality, excellent imagery. really enjoy your poetry Ahmed.

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Margaret Beil 07 January 2012

Balance, harmony and nature, forever green! Thanks for the share. I invite you to comment on my poem We Can Be Raindrops :)

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Rajendran Muthiah 03 January 2012

From the comments of Almedia Knight Oliver and Jacqui Broad, I presume that many a symbol beautify this poem. A chain of symbolic lines connects the poem as whole.

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Craig Mize 31 December 2011

All that I can say is that was beautiful and thank you for sharing

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David Gerardino 31 December 2011

read rich mullins, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Ifedayo Oshin 29 December 2011

OH, what a Jerusalem... the one we all hope for.. great green poem, Khaled

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 December 2011

A beautiful piece.

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Benjamin Paa Willie 29 December 2011

Green and love is the nature of nature. And it can be presented any better. Good work!

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Martin Bermea 28 December 2011

I think this is your best one!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 December 2011

Nice and spiritual poem Ahmed...i like it.

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Alicia Meyers 28 December 2011

Beautiful poem. (: I loved it(:

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Joses Tirtabudi 28 December 2011

Great poem. Great picture language.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 December 2011

A beautiful poem! ! May be sung by an archangel))))

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Jacqui Broad 22 December 2011

Ahmed, I think an angel sits on your shoulder and whispers sweet words of beauty in your ear. Peace for Jerusalem! Green pastures of love, where there's no more war. Then Jesus can return, riding on a donkey, and people greeting Him with green leaves of palmtrees. Beautiful poem...

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Dave Walker 21 December 2011

Beautiful as always. Your poems always Bring colour to the world. A great write.

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