in the beginning..
it was a colour,
a colour decided to be a poem
and it was.
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Balance, harmony and nature, forever green! Thanks for the share. I invite you to comment on my poem We Can Be Raindrops :)
From the comments of Almedia Knight Oliver and Jacqui Broad, I presume that many a symbol beautify this poem. A chain of symbolic lines connects the poem as whole.
All that I can say is that was beautiful and thank you for sharing
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OH, what a Jerusalem... the one we all hope for.. great green poem, Khaled
Green and love is the nature of nature. And it can be presented any better. Good work!
Ahmed, I think an angel sits on your shoulder and whispers sweet words of beauty in your ear. Peace for Jerusalem! Green pastures of love, where there's no more war. Then Jesus can return, riding on a donkey, and people greeting Him with green leaves of palmtrees. Beautiful poem...
Beautiful as always. Your poems always Bring colour to the world. A great write.
beautiful sense of freshness and vitality, excellent imagery. really enjoy your poetry Ahmed.