A Green Foliage. Comments

Beautiful. Speaks of the necessity of Closeness to nature and against felling of trees. Good

Shadows gathered around me, Leaves fell over the place. A green umbrella was above me, An unseen hand was roofing me.-So beautifully expressed !

The world is a shifting canvas. Things that were are no more. Memories are our best possessions

It's amazing how you vividly captured scenes of the past and intertwined it to present scenario.Magnificent poem. Thank you for sharing.

so gracefully crafted every word well penned 10++++

I like the chopped short words and lines and the rhythm of this poem. it leads you on to the next line and then the next. Great skill Ravi, well done.

Nice enjoying in greeny environment, bird watching.10

its so nice of you to share this kind of of poem to us, while reading this an image of you to the world of enchanted forest is I have easily imagined... I really like it, it touches me so much.... thanks for sharing.

I do remember those trees by the roads. Tamarind, Banyan, pepul and Jamun. Cities are encroaching everywhere. Thanks for bringing back those memories.

A sweet aroma with the muse of life. Nice work.

Truly, sweet memories of nature as such linger in mind throughout our life giving immense pleasure and joy.

true nature, s man. i envy you ravi.nice write voted10 surya

commemorating the past..but it has a great hope, green leaves means life..umbrella is a a roof..this poem is very beautiful.grace.

sir, the story you told. i saw with crytal clear vision.

Excellent composition with feelings.

'Nature is to be cherished to be perished only' is the prevailing trend...yet dense foliage of swwet memories can be immortal...nice write

such a beautiful poem.............cutting down tress is a crime.................well done

Most enjoyable Ravi, recalling this picture still fresh in your mind gives it a memorable lift at the end- imagery very good - Cindy

very visual indeed...you v crafted the poem very well....the kind of auditory and visual images you v used portrays a really beautiful picture in the reader's mind's eye thanks for the invitation 10+++

Fabulous write. Fully enjoyed my read. Amazing work with good note.