As the twilight was approaching,
Betab River was quietly flowing,
Fading sun rays kissed her goodbye,
As she flowed on, carrying on her bosom
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@Kumarmani Mahakul, Thanks for appreciating the last two lines of the poem and the picture too. Much inspired by your comment.
@Akhtar Jawad, Salaam, dear poet Akhtar Sahab! I am so much honored by the compliment, it touched me. Thank you, I am greatly inspired by your comment.
@Mahtab Bangalee, 'sometime some random thoughts disclose many beautiful expressions' - thank you, you are very right. Most of my poems come like that. Much inspired by your generous praise, thanks again!
As the sun sets and the twilight alone lingers, the public parks become vacant! The ramblers and the people who congregate in such serene areas to spend a beautiful evening go back to their homes, leaving the park benches empty. The vacant park bench has triggered such beautiful thoughts in you! A sure 10
A thrilling expression has been made on Betab Valley, Pahelgam, Kashmir. The graphic provided here is so enchanting. Concluding two lines are much impressive. Beautiful poem.
The lonely and restless green bench has many stories in its heart, only a poet like Khairul Ahsan can listen to these tales. A lovely poem.
Random Thinking of the Green Bench sometime some random thoughts disclose many beautiful expressions beautiful poem penned; I enjoyed Sir
@Valsa George, Loved your thoughtful comment, particularly the last line: 'The vacant park bench has triggered such beautiful thoughts in you! ' - Yes, it did exactly that. Thanks for the kind words.