Sunday, April 12, 2009

A Greater Wisdom Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cannot and I dare not
venture out into the dark alone...
I need a hand to guard and guide
A greater wisdom than my own...
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shweta advani
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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 August 2009

This is the earlier stage in the path of attaining wisdom.........all seekers of knowledge go through. But realizing that we need a Guru itself shows that the person has already reached the path...............What happens in the penultimate stage...........if u so wish........you may read my poem JEEVANMUKTHA. Very good poem........in fact more than a poem......wisdom

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Kainwo Moses 24 May 2009

Clearly spells out the importance of a guide anywhere.

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Jyoti Rawtani 14 May 2009

hi.....only a person with great wisdom can speak about such a greater wisdom so you already have that my friend......

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Bob Blackwell 10 May 2009

It is wise to have help, ateacher to guide us through our difficulties. You write very well. 10+

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Vinod Ak 06 May 2009

High thinking at a young age! ! ! Congrats! Keep it up! 10+

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Angelic(Annie) Female 03 May 2009

Thanks for the comment Shweta, your poem is well expressed too! We all need a greater wisdom, a guiding hand- a soul mate?

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Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

Stupidity is not that distant away from daredevilness...when we step out in 'dark', as you said and said well, we always 'need a hand to guard and guide'...good meaningful write, Shweta..10.

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Wojja Fink 24 April 2009

such wonderful poems bring their own light............................ John

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sky dreams 19 April 2009

this is a really great poem! .. the only thing i would say is the spelling of 'the'.. the 'd' kind of throws the poem off... but the poem itself is amazing.10++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 19 April 2009

Yes one needs shepherd but shepherd must be heavenly not earthly.....................Good Write.........

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 April 2009

ohh..this is a very soft poem. touching. thank you friend.

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