Friday, January 11, 2019

A Greater Peace Comments

Rating: 4.6

With wings of gold,
I touch the light,
What a joy to feel so high
Yet, gliding above,
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Bill Cantrell
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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

This is the most excellent Greater Peace, in full brilliance presented and at highest time observed. I have enjoyed tremendously, to my Favourites and TOP Marks for you and this scintillating poem. My two thumbs up for you, dear Bill.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant... wonderful poetry!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2021

A great poem my friend! Well penned.

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Mustafa Bellek 26 February 2021

Nice Poem

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Nice 26 February 2021

Nice poem

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Rebecca Navarre 06 February 2021

And Thank you for always having been so kind to me! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 06 February 2021

Very heart touching! .. Very beautifully sewn! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++ I pray and wish you all the best in all you do! .. Always, May God bless! ..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 September 2019

Wow! A lovely poem with sparkling expression! How brilliantly you open this poem, 'With wings of gold I touch the light'.....Thoroughly enjoyed this elegant piece of poetry my friend, beautifully penned.....10

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Bill Cantrell 13 January 2020

Thank you Dillip, I always respect and appreciate your reading and commenting

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2019

With wings of gold, I touch the light, What a joy to feel so high Yet, gliding above, My darkest fears, I still hear the others cry It is only when, I feel their pain, I shed my wings of gold Somehow I find a greater peace, Standing with them in the cold - - -This piece of poetry emanates from a kind and beautiful heart. A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Bill Cantrell 13 December 2019

Thank you, your involved comment is so very kind and I truly thank you

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Godfrey Morris 29 June 2019

Awesome write, we can only find peace only when we have embraced our humanity.

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Sandra Feldman 14 January 2019

A poet's good heart Is never alone For he feels So much for others Even when, They're not His own Good poet, Good soul. May those who read this poem realize that it is better to help than to do harm, even if with less wealth their bitter lives, they do arm. A truly beautiful poetic gem! And, lesson in human feeling.

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Kostas Lagos 11 January 2019

Great poem Bill! Full of sensitivity

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Bill Cantrell 14 January 2019

Thank you much Kostas, I appreciate it very much

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2019

You have beautifully perceived natural beauty and expressed brilliantly in this excellent poem. Golden wings touch light but snow falls on it and later melts. Others cry for peace and you hear. This really provokes thought. Standing within cold still you find greater peace. An excellent poem is well penned....10

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Bill Cantrell 14 January 2019

Thank you my friend Kumarmani, I do like my poetry to provoke though

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2019

I agree with the wonderful comments of Jez Brul and Aqua Flower. Only a good heart can feel the pain of others. And kindness is the core of great character. Wonderfully written.

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Bill Cantrell 14 January 2019

Thank you my friend for your reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2019

A powerful and wonderful poem full of kindness. Feeling the pain of others and helping them to ease such pain is the most wonderful feeling and I think it is the greatest peace. A great poem that touches the heart.

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Aqua Flower 11 January 2019

I love the picture. It goes well with the poem with the snow surrounding a blossoming flower! How can we enjoy the warmth of a flower with the coldness touching everone around us. Wonderful poetry my friend, as always! You inspire me!

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Aqua Flower 11 January 2019

How can we enjoy life while others suffer. That my friend is empathy and you have a lot of it. This is a wonderful piece of poetry about love and giving to others. What good is it to have a prize of happiness and not share it with others! 10+++++++++

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