A Greater Peace Poem by Bill Cantrell

A Greater Peace

Rating: 4.6


With wings of gold,
I touch the light,
What a joy to feel so high
Yet, gliding above,
My darkest fears,
I still hear the others cry
It is only when,
I feel their pain,
I shed my wings of gold
Somehow I find a greater peace,
Standing with them in the cold

A Greater Peace
Friday, January 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2019

A powerful and wonderful poem full of kindness. Feeling the pain of others and helping them to ease such pain is the most wonderful feeling and I think it is the greatest peace. A great poem that touches the heart.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2019

I agree with the wonderful comments of Jez Brul and Aqua Flower. Only a good heart can feel the pain of others. And kindness is the core of great character. Wonderfully written.

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Bill Cantrell 14 January 2019

Thank you my friend for your reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 September 2019

Wow! A lovely poem with sparkling expression! How brilliantly you open this poem, 'With wings of gold I touch the light'.....Thoroughly enjoyed this elegant piece of poetry my friend, beautifully penned.....10

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Bill Cantrell 13 January 2020

Thank you Dillip, I always respect and appreciate your reading and commenting

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

This is the most excellent Greater Peace, in full brilliance presented and at highest time observed. I have enjoyed tremendously, to my Favourites and TOP Marks for you and this scintillating poem. My two thumbs up for you, dear Bill.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant... wonderful poetry!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2021

A great poem my friend! Well penned.

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Mustafa Bellek 26 February 2021

Nice Poem

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Nice 26 February 2021

Nice poem

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