Dark metro tunnel: unending unknown
With no bright promise of the breaking day:
Not a place for stopping for too long.
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Kaleidoscopic scenes poem, written in fabulous style n rhymin. Pls do review my latest poem too.
thank you for writing this poem..i loved it..you are a pure aesthete. :)
An extraordinary attempt on an excellent thought and expressed in an exquisite way, thanks.
A very nice character study on life, and the truest meanings there within, very good indeed. I especially like the affirmation of humanity that you give, when you state that you'd like to have 'The Pirate' as a friend; that is true humanity. I salute you... and if I may be so bold: I call you my friend! Peace to you.
The true picture of the society is just before us.I remembered Canterbury Tales of Chaucer's travelogue through out my reading of this beautiful poem. Great work for all times.Rekhamandagere
A very good write, Matt, I loved the theme and the smooth flow of the poem. Great job, Lynn.
'Better be a happy beggar than a lonely king' very true if one has the courage.This poem reminds me so much of home (Dublin) it summoned up a little tear, thanks.
Dea Sir, This is a lovely and encouraging poem. thanks!