Tuesday, November 30, 2010

A Greater God. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dark metro tunnel: unending unknown
With no bright promise of the breaking day:
Not a place for stopping for too long.
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Matt Mooney
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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

Dea Sir, This is a lovely and encouraging poem. thanks!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2013

Kaleidoscopic scenes poem, written in fabulous style n rhymin. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Heather Wilkins 01 October 2013

excellent writing on a good subject.

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Heather Wilkins 01 October 2013

excellent writing on a good subject.

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Zoya Khalid 24 May 2012

thank you for writing this poem..i loved it..you are a pure aesthete. :)

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Wahab Abdul 01 March 2012

An extraordinary attempt on an excellent thought and expressed in an exquisite way, thanks.

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Smoky Hoss 23 August 2011

A very nice character study on life, and the truest meanings there within, very good indeed. I especially like the affirmation of humanity that you give, when you state that you'd like to have 'The Pirate' as a friend; that is true humanity. I salute you... and if I may be so bold: I call you my friend! Peace to you.

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Rekha Mandagere 19 July 2011

The true picture of the society is just before us.I remembered Canterbury Tales of Chaucer's travelogue through out my reading of this beautiful poem. Great work for all times.Rekhamandagere

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Lynn Glover 23 January 2011

A very good write, Matt, I loved the theme and the smooth flow of the poem. Great job, Lynn.

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Colm Hayes 12 December 2010

'Better be a happy beggar than a lonely king' very true if one has the courage.This poem reminds me so much of home (Dublin) it summoned up a little tear, thanks.

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