Friday, May 8, 2009

A Great Wonder Comments

Rating: 4.2

What is human kind?
What is its value?
What is its purpose?
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Gina Layog 07 November 2010

humankind, God's greatest wonder, We are blessed, yet cursed, Created in God's Design, To choose to do evil, or do right, Values we strive, the dream we fight.... God's gift to us, the gift of Life....

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Courtney Steele 07 November 2010

I love this short but full of purpose.

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Gita Ashok 30 July 2010

A short and sweet write carrying such a simple but strong message.

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Ezna Stephna 25 May 2010

True....what is human kind........amazing this short poem got lot of sensitive meaning very good and excellent in the manage you wrote my dear poet 10++++++++++

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This is so true. A little kindness goes a long way. Very good!

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Kare Bear 10 April 2010

Amazing. From poet to poet, this poem is great and very 'down to earth'. I love it.

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Annabel Sheila 14 January 2010

Profoundly beautifully written! You have said so very much in so few words. I really enjoyed your poem. Anna

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Sahar Sahar 02 December 2009

It beautiful short poem, flickering on your lips while feeling alone and frail in this huge universe...but God is great to create.......his best creature the man

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Kassiah Gervaise 28 November 2009

beautiful to some but it has little power to me because i don't believe in god but never the less a good poem.

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Ewa Espling 27 September 2009

so few words.....such beautiful strength! You using the term 'the power of the word' in its true meaning! from heart thank u..

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Aparna Sinha 25 September 2009

How simple things can be so strong, so inspirational..I am so moved

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Poetic Soul 14 September 2009

Very good piece! It was short, yet still moved me. This speaks of God's greatness and how the kind acts from the human heart and soul itself can truley makes God shine for what he is. This is a great piece. I hope to read more fom you.

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For until we lend a hand we are not man Our live we live in lost Until we praise He who paid the cost. Lovely boys and girls Life is beyond this world When finally that you see Then, you're welcome To Humanity.

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Sylvia Holland 02 August 2009

beautiful, lovely little piece

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DaNa XxX 27 July 2009

simple but very nice..i go cought by the title its really catchy...! ! ! DaNa...

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Kimbaline Navas 25 July 2009

this is simple but very nice

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dr veenaa rai 24 July 2009

ur poetry reveals the true person that u r-full of empathy, care, sensitive, truthful, dedicated, peace lover, a poet in toto. may god bless ur lovely soul...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 July 2009

'great wonder' written greatly! 10+

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God is great. Everything in this world has their purpose. Nice write Afzal keep promoting peace and kindness..thanks best regards, jdh

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true words, , beautifully written..thanks for your kindness

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