Friday, October 9, 2009

A Great Warrior In A Melted Candle Comments

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there will be no other day but a memory of
today, just a dropp of rainbow of my life sharpen the
edge of the past and find the wounded last, out to rise;
and let me please return in the portray that makes
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Antonio Liao
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lure me not to light the scented candle for the immortal friendship leaves no regret to hold the torch a touch of wonder in these lines, a luring potential

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lure me not to light the scented candle for the immortal friendship leaves no regret to hold the torch a touch of wonder in these lines, a luring potential

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 October 2009

nice write here! By the way, thanks for reading and commenting on my poems.

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Kesav Easwaran 22 October 2009

'lure me not to light the scented candle for the immortal friendship leaves no regret to hold the torch i adore, sprout the golden halos of harmony of the wind, whirl fully callus the chariot of sharpen harpoon, surge in the bleed of a warriors shielded the flame of victory'... Eloquent imageries there Anton...thanks...10

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 16 October 2009

An excellent piece of work

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wow for this so warm poem..i loved that angelic images you painted such a romantic time and place..a great warrior too deserve that moments when his heart glow..

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

Lovely poem! Nice imagery.

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