A Great Sail To Fairytale Comments
Its the sail to Fairy tale
seeing the whale.
everywhere its Princess,
with her very beautiful dress.
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Princess with beautiful dress wonders mind of many. Lion can be deer. All impossible things can be possible here. A great fairy-tale is presented here with nice imagery. An excellent poem is very well drafted. This is a perfect poem chosen as the poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! ...10
Congrats, once again, many good and bad happens in the welve months of a year and it is remembered as if we have read twelve chapters of a fairy tale.
When I see poems from a different culture and linguistical structure not in tune to certain districts, I try to put myself on the foreign soil of the poetic page and dialect of the poet, the diversity in poetry is a beautiful thing, so my friend, be proud! You reached for the enchantment of a child’s pallet and you accomplished this! Pay no attention to the old snobs...be proud!
WOW! A poem for children, beautifully worded, Nilay! Congratulations with the choice of Poem Hunter Com as Member Poem Of The Day, a great surprise! I have enjoyed a very lot this lovely poem. A 10+++++++ GBU in Abundance, Amen.
All miracles happen in twelve, and all are delve. in a fairy tale something more and more may easily happen, Congratulations,10
Fairy tale- oh ho ho tail of fairness of doing anything! good penned //// good choice as poem of the day
All things are possible here! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This horrible bit of dribble again? Again? ! ! ? ? Why? Sometimes this site is so ridiculous.
Sorry for misunderstanding I myself has written this poem, Thanks all for such wonderful comments
A poem like history it repeats itself and the fairytale carries on? .........words wisely written by Nilay, s son!
Its the sail to Fairy tale seeing the whale. everywhere its Princess, with her very beautiful dress..reminded of Dysney land......... your imagination is powerful. write and write making the best use of your talents.. thank u dear poet. congrats for POD
Such a pretty fairy tale Horatian Ode... congrats, Nilay for being chosen for the day....10++++
Wow! Landscape of a wonderland with all kinds of fancied creatures having powers of metamorphosis. Thanks a lot.
A beautiful dream of a peace loving human, a nice use of words and lines. Congrats.
Loved it! Went back to my childhood listening fairly tale from ma!
very imaginative..brings back childlike visions...
This is a terribly weak effort. The cadence is unbalanced by rhymes that don't go anywhere, the grammar and diction are both atrocious and then finally, what the heck is a delve, anyway?
If he added a D to delve changing it to delved it would have worked..
thank you for your kind comment and suggestions, it's written by my son who is still 11 years old and I will pass your feedback to him and i am sure he will improve it in coming days
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9/6/2025 2:47:01 AM # 1.0.0
A higly imaginative poem nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.