Monday, October 13, 2014

A Great Poetess Comments

Rating: 4.8

Admired and enjoyed,
As a guide I deployed,
Messages I found,
In her poems so profound,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Beautifully crafted. Enjoyed the poem

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 December 2020

A Classic Poem of beauty and rhythmic splendour. Top stars. I take this opportunity to wish you a wonderful 2021, dear Akhtar Sahab!

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Rajnish Manga 30 December 2020

Her love children are the beautiful flowers, Her love children are the pleasant showers, Her favorite child is the beautiful moon.... // Absolutely fascinating. It reflects the esteemed place that we have in our hearts for women who are composing top class poetry.

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Varsha M 30 December 2020

This is really beautiful poem for the poetess do well sdmired and placed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2020

The last six lines are impressing, Sir! I cite them here: Her love children you see every night, And in the sun you see her light, Her love children are the beautiful flowers, Her love children are the pleasant showers, Her favorite child is the beautiful moon, She believes in love and love is a boon...............Truly Great Poetess is Nature herself. Well captured and loveliest worded. Such a beautiful poem. Love rereading this. Thank you for sharing, Akhtar Sir!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 March 2020

This magnificent piece of poetry compels a reader to read it time and again sir! Work of art! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 March 2020

BEAUTIFUL LOVING TRIBUTE WRITING TO A GREAT IMMORTAL POETESS

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Navod Dilhara 11 February 2020

I like the rhyming of the poem.Nice piece of work.

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Denis Mair 06 January 2020

In my heart this poem is about Mother Nature, the greatest poetess of all. All mortal poetesses receive gifts from her, so if we love one of them, we are loving her.

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A B Faniki 04 September 2019

As always I enjoy your poems bcoz of the flow of words and their rhyme and rhythm. lovely write

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 July 2019

Another poetic gem from a great thinker. You let your readers ride along with your thoughts in this magnificent write. A wonderful work of art worth of being read again.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 June 2019

A great poem sir! The magnetic power of this wonderful work drags me to read and re-read it!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 April 2019

Always wins the wars, She's Venus in stars, A candle although old, But her flame is gold, AN EXCELLENT poem about some one then the Twist speaks all of tha some one.. .''woh muskuratey toe hongai.. meree nazam par mur muskurana toe unkee aadat hee hai.. abh humme sehne kee bhee..adat see bun gayeee DOSTON AAP BHEE MUSKARAN A]KABHEE Sabhee do u ever read comments NO 56 PLUS WHO CAN BUT JA SAHAAB

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 February 2019

Her love children are the beautiful flowers, Her love children are the pleasant showers, Her favorite child is the beautiful moon, She believes in love and love is a boon....great expression.....an elegant piece of work! To MyPoemList

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Bipasha D 04 February 2019

Its a joy to read this again.

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Bharati Nayak 05 October 2018

Wow- - - - - - You put us in suspese - - -Holding our breathe we read till the last line to find the great poetess who spells her charm in the poet's heart.Who can be such a great poetess other than nature, whose love children are flowers, her love children are lovely showers ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - -A great write, thanks for sharing.

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 03 October 2018

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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Nadia umber Lodhi 27 August 2018

Beautiful poem sir well written in our hypocritc society people give no respepect to poetess

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 July 2018

A magnificent read, a most pleasurable treat and through my being fond of poems created with much care and love, finally I open PH again to read your most beautiful poem about A Great Immortal Poetess, and guess WHO is she? I let her be as Mysterious as you have created her, Mysteries are still the best options to keep, Akhtar! My grandest appreciations and respect for you and your most beautiful poem. A 10+++++++ for the Vote.

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I have read and reread again your amazing poem. One GREAT mistake I ever did here ro have called you only AKHTAR it should be AKHTAR Sir. Atill a most beautiful poem, Akhtar Sir. I have enjoyed very much. Than you so much for having created this. God's Blessings In Abundance.

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Britte Ninad 16 May 2018

It seems some motherly love is exposed here exquisitely

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