Tuesday, January 2, 2007

A Great Man And His Final Verdict..... Comments

Rating: 4.5

So many knights
so many fights
so many heads
so many deaths......
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Thampi KEE
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isabella Francis 22 October 2011

Really awesome Kee..

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Louis Cecile 21 October 2011

Interesting take and use of metaphor. The flow of the poem works well to the climax of the piece. Great writing.

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Rekha Mandagere 05 July 2011

For a civilian, the life of a knight looks great and glamorous. But the great man alone knows the gravity and pressure of his work. Friend, you have penned the inner struggle of a knight beautifully. Marks 10

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LoveLifeLen A. 02 May 2011

Hello Kee, I love your Poems, and I want to read more, perhaps I'll sleep late tonight and read them all! You are so creative Kee... I love the litany, it's quite telling...Excellent! You are a very good Poet! Have a glorious week to you... :)

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 01 April 2011

Nice poem, very well written.

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Braja K Sarkar 22 September 2010

Well crafted & thoughtful poem.. I like it.

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Catherine Yen 15 July 2010

Very meaningful and thoughtful

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Bijaylaxmi Sarangi 05 May 2010

Beautiful poem indeed..I like it very much. :)

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Joseph Vincent Orlanda 06 April 2010

i guess its a fact of life...man's continuous struggle for his destiny. nice...

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Chuck Petz 02 December 2008

Very thoughtful piece

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Subbaraman N V 01 July 2008

Yes, that precisely is the way of life! A nice poem!

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Janice Windle 28 September 2007

This has a fine pace, Kee, and a wonderful rhythm that makes it read as a heartfelt piece of work.

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Kelsey B. 12 January 2007

so many fights so many knights that i love. you are truely a good poet.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 January 2007

A Penning for th' many epochs past & whatever epochs still lay ahead. For as long as thereve been years, thr' has lived War & the afterstain of Bias that it carries on down to the forthcoming genres....It has always been...Most sorrowfully, it will always be.....A fine Write, Kee...Kudos! ~ f.j.r. ~

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Mary Das 04 January 2007

Hi, it's very meaningful. May there be peace in this world.

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