A Great Man And His Final Verdict..... Comments

Really awesome Kee..

Interesting take and use of metaphor. The flow of the poem works well to the climax of the piece. Great writing.

For a civilian, the life of a knight looks great and glamorous. But the great man alone knows the gravity and pressure of his work. Friend, you have penned the inner struggle of a knight beautifully. Marks 10

Hello Kee, I love your Poems, and I want to read more, perhaps I'll sleep late tonight and read them all! You are so creative Kee... I love the litany, it's quite telling...Excellent! You are a very good Poet! Have a glorious week to you... :)

Nice poem, very well written.

Well crafted & thoughtful poem.. I like it.

Very meaningful and thoughtful

Beautiful poem indeed..I like it very much. :)

i guess its a fact of life...man's continuous struggle for his destiny. nice...

Very thoughtful piece

Yes, that precisely is the way of life! A nice poem!

This has a fine pace, Kee, and a wonderful rhythm that makes it read as a heartfelt piece of work.

so many fights so many knights that i love. you are truely a good poet.

A Penning for th' many epochs past & whatever epochs still lay ahead. For as long as thereve been years, thr' has lived War & the afterstain of Bias that it carries on down to the forthcoming genres....It has always been...Most sorrowfully, it will always be.....A fine Write, Kee...Kudos! ~ f.j.r. ~

Hi, it's very meaningful. May there be peace in this world.