Again, Gajanan Mishra, your verse is moving and crafted, but your grammar is faulty. " All threatened very existence." should read: " All threatens very existence." The best way to become a truly great poet is to take the time to learn from others. John Lars Zwerenz
Gajanan sounds like a concerned politician. Maybe he has political aspirations. He knows there are real challenges. Is not offering a solution. Humble- takes a humble man to know the true dimensions of a problem!
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Again, Gajanan Mishra, your verse is moving and crafted, but your grammar is faulty. " All threatened very existence." should read: " All threatens very existence." The best way to become a truly great poet is to take the time to learn from others. John Lars Zwerenz