Sunday, May 12, 2013

A Gray Bird Comments

Rating: 4.0

Wedding hall lighting like a palace
Da king sits beside da queen

a gray bird sheds some tear….
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Ruby Mostazir
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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

........the gay bird sheds tears..............a deep thought presented beautifully

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 December 2013

Oh must b a lonesome bird. Wow Nice poem with deep human meanings in allusion. Take care.

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Kanav Justa 20 May 2013

grey bird sheds some tear, , , a poignant write.. nicee

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Wahab Abdul 18 May 2013

the grey bird is in dejection...nicely presented.......love it

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 May 2013

Nature can't hide the truth so the case with us Grey bird always sheds tears to bring out the truth/deep very deep

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the cries of the people beside the palatial residence..there are lots of birds too..

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 May 2013

nice drop.meaningful one.liked it.

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