Monday, August 10, 2009

A Grain Of Wheat Comments

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nurture on the time of memories, ripe in the season
of harvest, and store for a days to wait, till it can be
used for a meal to nourish the flesh
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Antonio Liao
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A seedtime and harvest write. loved the imagination, word content of your poem. Beautifullydone; D

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Ena N. Mori 13 April 2010

'gain the better of tomorrow as the grain, grow in the watered land in the sun it stand, blown by the wind of uncertainty, patiently look the distance day to come...' a lot of creative thoughts went into this, antonio. very inspirational! thanks.

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This is bursting with beauty. Rich and refreshing my friend!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

wow... so poetic and artistic... nice figurative and imagery

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Yelena M. 14 August 2009

'each seed that sprout, be as the silent of the angel of the wings that spread in the victory of every soul we will just return, to a beginning of the seed..... ' your lines are a harbinger of light, an inspiration and wisdom for any reader seeking truth..thanks for sharing, Antonio. A.

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Obinna Eruchie 13 August 2009

An affectionate poem full of wise words well penned.

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 August 2009

very wholesome... it sends a very great message... really a piece of wisdom... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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a so beautiful passionated deep, and wise verses touched a waiting aching soul..the whispers of your thoughts remind me by Gebran khalil WISDOM and thoughts, , , , , , , a comfort for the weary mind are those thoughts....

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