Saturday, April 17, 2010

A Grain Of Sand Comments

Rating: 2.7

Do you see this grain of sand
Lying loosely in my hand?
Do you know to me it brought
Just a simple loving thought?
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Frances Ellen Watkins Harper
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Kevin Patrick 23 June 2017

In the star lit realms of space I was made to have a place. Damn! Now that's good writing!

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Sylvaonyema Uba 23 June 2017

Should the ocean flood the world. A good piece of poetry embellished in rhetoric questions. Well done! Sylva.

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Simone Inez Harriman 23 June 2017

A beautiful poem that enriches the spirit.

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Susan Williams 23 June 2017

A huge write - -I am going to read more by this lady

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 June 2017

Wonderful poetry with a great flow and rhyming. In His creation even a grain of sand has some importance. And He has a purpose in creating it. Nice poetry.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 June 2017

Within His sight! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2017

Fantastic expression. The last lines... Knowing man is greater far Than the brightest sun or star.. are most meaningful. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 23 June 2017

Beautiful poem! Most of it written in total humility. End however displays man's belief in being superior to rest. In some way it describes our conflict and struggle that each one of us have to go through in keeping our balance and proper place while we navigate our life as an individual against all other animate or inanimate forces. All of which have a place in existence.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 June 2017

Reminds me of the song BECAUSE WE CAN popularized by BION JOVI....πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Thanks for postingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Frances Ellen Watkins Harper

Frances Ellen Watkins Harper

Baltimore, Maryland
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