A Grain Of Sand Comments

In the star lit realms of space I was made to have a place. Damn! Now that's good writing!

Should the ocean flood the world. A good piece of poetry embellished in rhetoric questions. Well done! Sylva.

A beautiful poem that enriches the spirit.

A huge write - -I am going to read more by this lady

Wonderful poetry with a great flow and rhyming. In His creation even a grain of sand has some importance. And He has a purpose in creating it. Nice poetry.

Within His sight! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Fantastic expression. The last lines... Knowing man is greater far Than the brightest sun or star.. are most meaningful. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful poem! Most of it written in total humility. End however displays man's belief in being superior to rest. In some way it describes our conflict and struggle that each one of us have to go through in keeping our balance and proper place while we navigate our life as an individual against all other animate or inanimate forces. All of which have a place in existence.

Reminds me of the song BECAUSE WE CAN popularized by BION JOVI....😃😃😃 Thanks for posting👍👍👍