A Grain Of Sand Comments

This is a strangely appealing piece - with its awkward, staccato rhythm and its warm recognizable images of the sea. Great title too. There is much depth beneath your waves. love, Allie xxxx

There is a loving feel about this poem. We are all but a grain of sand under someones eyes. We leave our footprints on this earth where ever we go. A great write my friend and thanks for sharing it. David

Nicely written, has a lot of depth behind it.

Another beauty.....love that it's about the ocean and all its wonders.....Grains of sand we all be, finite pieces throughout eternity... marci.xo

wonderful writing like always lol