A Grain Of Salt And More Comments
the other me slithers out of
peep holes, cracks and crannies
slides and spreads, rolls and multiplies
filling the here and vast beyond
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salt only...vacation from 'pepper and sweet'...good theme...good presentation, Shimon 10
Sterling imagework....mellifluous construction...Solid crafting...liked this much... fjr **
'on a vacation, from some of myself' very beautiful sentence and amazing poem... Loved it...
on a vacation from some of you; yes, Shimon, that's just beautiful; let it all slither off and we'll have you well rested at the end of the vacation. and we'll take you with a grain of salt, AND MORE.
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7/20/2025 2:31:47 AM # 1.0.0
Very good presentation of a vacation..interesting