Monday, June 3, 2019

A Grader In The Oesophagus Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're eating bread,
Fried yam or something similar.
It starts to choke you.
You feel like a construction grader
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Augustine Yirideme
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Bri Edwards 12 November 2019

" To flash the grader down the." ..." flush" ? :) some favorite lines: " Now you feel your oesophagus is Going to explode any second; In fact you wish it would just explode, " bugom? you use " oo" and " ooh" . are they meant to be used the same way (a pause, an expression of surprise, or? ? ?) . to MyPoemList bri ;)

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bri edwards 12 November 2019

" To flash the grader down the." ..." flush" ? :) some favorite lines: " Now you feel your oesophagus is Going to explode any second; In fact you wish it would just explode, " bugom? you use " oo" and " ooh" . are they meant to be used the same way (a pause, an expression of surprise, or? ? ?) . to MyPoemList bri ;)

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 June 2019

such a nice write, Augustine. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Augustine Yirideme

Augustine Yirideme

Wenchi, Ghana
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