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Night was falling in
Birds folded their wings.
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Poem ends up with a beautiful message... Soulful prayers bless every life, Graceful hearts are always answered. Poem rhymes very well. very true said, prayers never goes unanswered. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thank you Sir, for beautiful comment for my poem Precious. Nice to know you are from Palakkad. I haven't stayed in Palakkad, though its my hometown. I was born in Palakkad. Completed my studies from Mumbai and initial few years from Madhya Pradesh.
‘Prayer Personalized’…way learnt how to do it…you’ve shown and put vibe in it… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
Soulful prayers bless every life, Graceful hearts are always answered. Wonderfuly found poem. Really thank`s for sharing. We become richer getting such poems!
when its a great write..length do not matter..atleast not to me or any other true lover of poetry. Ballad of Reading Gaol- Oscar Wilde is long poem too. I loved it... Your poem is beautiful...cannot be compared, well penned. I could feel one with it..thanks a lot for sharing
excellent work. very nice and imaginative. the power of prayers is one of my favourite topics. yes surely God Almighty is there and he always does justice. everyone gets his share of good and bad.thanks for sharing this lovely piece with all.take care. this poem deserves a 10+.
a graceful poem.........and meaningful depiction......length is not at all a problem..and the flow is very much meaningful........
It is a narrative poem, very well written.The widow has an overwhelming pain.Very impressive.............10++++++++++
Graceful hearts are always answered. .................. It 's wonderful to know that all her prayers are answered.I just marveled at the thought that there is a God who listens, who cares and love endlessly. On our knees, being humble and leaving it all to the almighty. A wonderful piece that I will never forget for the rest of my life.
A beautiful poem to ponder...the insightful thoughts is with the theme. Nice concept......10
This is surely a poem of wonderment. Christ was the sign that was overlooking the need of this graceful lady who had faith. Your poem is written with skill and understanding of the power of prayer and love. I agree with Shalini that we need to look for the signs to interpret the power of God. A beautiful and touching poem. 10 love Karin
these kind of miracles can only happen in poems and stories, god never come to help anyone directly, he sends some messenger or an angel in the form of another person to help... anyways nice...
her prayers were answered...grace was bestowed upon her....
A beautiful presentation of a graceful lady in a simple style. Excellent, Ravi. This how I also wish to write my poems.
Written in very graceful style- - - Enjoyed reading.