A Gothic Suicide Comments

Exceptional work.

i love this poem the best dark poem i have read so far very good

so real i could feel all her pain and see her blood it touched me i dont write profesionally yet but read this depression and let me know from a pros point what its like

amazing write.this piece really touchd me in many ways. i so understand the pain writen beneath these lines.

I almost started crying when I read this poem. The most influencial poem I have read yet! I love it, I love it, I love it. I didn't think is was possibly to stimulate such emotions through words but you are an expert at doing this. Please keep writing. I will be reading your work for sure, for many years to come. -C.Candea

That was creepy...but intense with such a reality as of to daily life. I can see her as I read the poem over in my mind...she has some deep pain that runs like the harsh waters of the ocean, which never seems to stop. I really like this poem...it gives me coldchills.

it's very real i could see her... i could see her blood