Monday, October 24, 2011

A Goodbye Comments

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my hands are drifted and raised,
palms rotate and fingers are let,
'Let' to give you a last goodbye;
a goodbye - which have make my heart to break,
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sahara adhikari
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hoping for a good day i forbade, , , , nice composition nice day may come any way wait for good outcome and welcome

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Ramesh Rai 09 December 2011

never say good bye, always say meet u again, nice poem, full marks.

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Ramesh Rai 09 December 2011

never say good bye, always say meet u again, nice poem, full marks.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Beautiful poem! Sometimes a goodbye can break our mood of heart.. Well written, , ,

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