A Goodbye Comments

i love this poem..its beautiful and well written

David - Hello again... 'And when the last brick fell, I thought I heard a cry'! Dorothy

This piece has a distinctive pulling effect, like that of a strong magnet to the heart Exquisite by design Take care Love duncan X

A gentle piece, personalising a piece of long remembered architecture methinks. Sad when the door has to be closed on what has been. And yet, another door will surely open on a new adventure. Lovely piece of nostalgia. love, Allie xxxx

Spooky one David. Funny how one feels a presence in certain places and situations. Interesting write, interesting storyline. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Well your even going to miss the ghost, well i never what Sentimental cretures people are...

David, I am aware of the context in which you write, and this is poignant, rather beautiful, tragically wistful. Yet there is optimism, for I know you will be moving onwards and upwards. And I wish you the very best. t x

An where do you think you are off to then David? Just noted your birth date! another cute gemini poet huh? I must warn you though, Ghosts are notoriously hard to get a grip of or rid of! lol Smiling at you, Tai in de skies