Monday, November 28, 2011

A Good Thing? Comments

Rating: 5.0

If strong people break down and cry,
and go on living without asking why,
is it a good thing to depend and rely,
and look up for freedom in the blue sky?
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Jacqui Broad
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Harindhar Reddy 11 December 2011

Is it a good thing, then, I wonder, to feel this way, 'when you want answers immediately, but find it on another day... ' Umm African, Love fountain! you have mastered the art of poetry by questioning your own Indian dove like this! Anyway, i like this poem of yours as it is a flow of your heart. can take your heart and run away! hello smile for ever - ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :)

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Shadow Girl 30 November 2011

Nice flowing poem with great meningful words...enjoyed. -SG

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 November 2011

Sister, you got natural talent when it comes to poetry........im coming to Joburg to get an autograph..ha ha ha...! ! ! just sign it and give it to taxi drivers who travels to Dbn at park station...lol.

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Crimson Love 28 November 2011

Magnificent poem! Your words rhymed so well, this poems flow was phenomenal, Truly this is a beautiful write, that only the genius that is YOU could create.

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Harindhar Reddy 28 November 2011

Jacqueline you are the star (Tallikot) of my thoughts. I can feeling drowsy numbness in blood vessels... Hey! Hey! Hey! Who said you are lonely. A poem of self expression and confession in confabulation with the poetic world and people's globe....... 'is it a good thing to bare your soul for others to read, when loneliness cannot satisfy your aching need? ' You are always there in the thoughts of your sidekicks oh my cherry blossom! You are the lady lissom and female awesome and I like you poems by heart wholesome! Never I am lonely for you there in my thoughts - Ha! Ha! Ha! :) :) :) :) :) 'is it a good thing to bare your soul for others to read, when loneliness cannot satisfy your aching need? '

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Kara Towe 28 November 2011

Really enjoyed this poem. It is ' a good thing' to express ones self, like, you have done so wonderfully here. Very deep, invites wonder. Thanks for sharing.

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