Sunday, November 30, 2008

A Good Reason Not To Drink. Comments

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As the wine stung my lips.
My mind dizzied with dreams.
At least, I cannot hope to think it was reality.
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Jordan Phoenix
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 December 2008

Sometimes we need a drink to ease the burden that clouds our poor mind.nice writes Jordan.

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Jess H 30 November 2008

You captured me, reminds me so much of my life with my ex

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I know what you mean.. This is a great poem Krista

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flows really nicely great write Dan

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Chitra - 30 November 2008

twists and turns ensnare us in the trap of youth and make us loose our way at times leaving us to wonder why

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