Wednesday, November 19, 2008

A Good Line Comments

Rating: 4.9

A good line in a poem
is not there when-
I start with a poem.
A good line in a poem-
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Naidz Ladia 02 April 2009

i agree on this statement of yours...you are absolutely right..

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2009

A very plain statement, and one I agree with. GW62

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Ency Bearis 01 April 2009

a great concept to start with...

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Sandra Fowler 01 March 2009

The good lines are the lines that create themselves. Very profound thoughts. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 January 2009

I love lines when they are still in the making.10

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Subbaraman N V 27 January 2009

Short and sweet reflecting reality! Congrats!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 January 2009

It is a new concept for me to learn

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Sankar Sarkar 22 January 2009

FINE AND PRFOUND THEME CO EXISTING IN THIS PIECE, THANKS...........

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 January 2009

A good line in a poem is a line behind the line.

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Meggie Gultiano 17 January 2009

this is cute and a very nice piece, Sam.

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

A good line is as spontaneous a bolt of lightning...a serendipitous moment. write on Samanyan.

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 January 2009

short write yet very interesting.. mind's stirring lines..with great concept..... brilliant thoughts....GOOD LINES ++++10 for this.....

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Ruchita Sharma 25 December 2008

i totally agree wit howard.... its might appear simple...but requires lot of talent

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Stephanie Fiddy 18 December 2008

wow. Very interesting concept. Awesome! :)

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Deep in its simplicity yet profound in its simplicity. The second line is always most important because it is not how you begin but how you end.10/10

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Indira Renganathan 02 December 2008

Quite spiritful..nice write..10

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C.H. Seow 30 November 2008

simplicity wins it all! =D loved it..i'm sure not many people will understand ur straight away..that makes a good poem..

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 November 2008

This is the spirit that says trial costs nothing.

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Anjali Sinha 27 November 2008

well your 'good line' is a good line going back and forth regards anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

yes...most probably a poet too carries forward a lot from prevous birth! well, a good and meaningful short piece, Sankar...your poem is more than 'a good line'...10

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