Saturday, January 3, 2009

A Good Intoxication Comments

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I thought my life was well
rounded in a bottle.
I was aloof and trampled
by the weight of my despair.
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Sarah Sisson
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You are strong! You are good! ...these words from one of my Poetry In Motion Poems I now dedicate to you who speaks with the voice of a poet.

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C. P. Sharma 17 January 2009

...drink on from His cup of positivity. I loved it, a beautiful composition. CP

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 January 2009

I was aloof and trampled by the weight of my despair................oh what a feeling of pain when quantified in matrx of grief, exact ratinale finds its own edfice by the experinces in a life, grief seems to overwhelmmed by the grace endurance and marching beyond, i simply love this new phrase, superbly wroght through lucidity,10+++++, thanks for sharing

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Kite Remedy 10 January 2009

yes, a positive thought after all the things happened in our lives.. great works..

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