Sunday, October 14, 2007

A Good Day To Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fog hangs thick, engulfing the ground
Footsteps muffled, not making a sound
Sun rising slowly, in the eastern sky
God grant me serenity, tis a good day to die
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Poison 9901
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Janice Windle 25 October 2007

Another great evocation of the mediaeval age. I could paint a picture of this image, it's so clear.x Jan

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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007

Write with a salient character... it portays sorrow in a mystical poetry! Enjoyed it sir, top marks.

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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007

A poem with a character... it portays sorrow in a mystical poetry! Enjoyed it sir, top marks.

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Thad Wilk 14 October 2007

Excellent! enjoyed reading this poem (A good day to die) - (10) ! ! Thad

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David Harris 14 October 2007

What a beautiful, if somewhat sad poem. The old world flavour kept me reading until the end. Wonderful flow from beginning to end and the imagery is great. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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.... and a good day to live. Pensive and eloquent. t x

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Emancipation Planz 14 October 2007

Hei Poison, Personally, this one I should not being reading at the moment... but it was very clever...One Peace at a time... Deana

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