Fog hangs thick, engulfing the ground
Footsteps muffled, not making a sound
Sun rising slowly, in the eastern sky
God grant me serenity, tis a good day to die
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Write with a salient character... it portays sorrow in a mystical poetry! Enjoyed it sir, top marks.
A poem with a character... it portays sorrow in a mystical poetry! Enjoyed it sir, top marks.
Excellent! enjoyed reading this poem (A good day to die) - (10) ! ! Thad
What a beautiful, if somewhat sad poem. The old world flavour kept me reading until the end. Wonderful flow from beginning to end and the imagery is great. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
.... and a good day to live. Pensive and eloquent. t x
Hei Poison, Personally, this one I should not being reading at the moment... but it was very clever...One Peace at a time... Deana
Another great evocation of the mediaeval age. I could paint a picture of this image, it's so clear.x Jan