A Good Christian Comments
A hunter boy born to God fearing parents
Was taught from his very childhood
Not to fail going to church on Sundays
To make God happy, avowing His parenthood
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An impulse turns back the life. We keep unlimited trust on God. Clouds part and pat over heaven. Father of heaven ever blesses all is true. We shall keep trust on him. An interesting sharing is done here really.10
Loaded with love laughter is this creative composition. Well done my friend!
A gripping story with such a funny ending. I thank you for the smile you've put on my face.
A beautiful poem with high speculation bearing morality.. Excellent collocation. Many thanks........10
An amusing poem with a wonderful story, conveying a great message! ...10
Reminded me about reading Ishop's fable in my childhood. A lovely write with a moral in it.
Loved this one. The humour, the narration and the subtle message. Very well done, Valsa-ji. (10)
As usual your poetry is gentle with a little steel thrown in. The hunter got his wish. Moral of the tale, be careful what you pray for. Good read. Well written. Happy reader BB
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7/19/2025 11:54:38 AM # 1.0.0
A good story poem written in Perfect Faith. It provides a magnificent lesson. God do reside in children in their innocence 10+