Monday, April 27, 2020

A Good Chemistry Lesson Comments

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Our Chemistry; part of my Death-o-nomics
It's this new-age course I'm teaching
Death and preaching from the ministry
It started due to our chemistry
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Axley Jade Blaze
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Bri Edwards 18 October 2020

If nothing else [and i'm NOT saying the poem is 'nothing else'! ! ], this poem IS interesting, an adjective i try to avoid in my poem comments. I'm short on time now, and may return...tomorrow? some favorite lines: " But, you have to jump on it with me Join in because you're dead too I told God, and he said: " I am not taking either one of you! " " bri :)

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Nicole Settimi 07 November 2020

I actually have a similar feeling when I read my own poem, here. I don't know that it is profound, nor necessarily " quality, " - but I do like to pen these sort of hip-hoppish poems every now & again. Cheers!

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Yiyan Han 18 October 2020

A chemistry lesson or lesson on mentality - not sure as a man ;)

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