Tuesday, July 30, 2013

A Goldfish Comments

Rating: 4.5

A goldfish pounded the container
She beckoned me to go near
She opened her mouth
Closed it
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Cathy Shao
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Khairul Ahsan 16 August 2013

A wonderful poem, Cathy Shao! What she had said was, 'Let me be free” Thanks for interpreting the language of the gold fish. Very few of us can understand the language of a canary bird, a caged animal or an aquarium fish. You may like to read my poem, 'The Small Sparrow And The Small Lesson'.

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