A Golden Thread Comments

you're my heroine, you make me stronger it was you honey, who would hold me sway when i've lost faith, a golden thread our lives entwined it holds us together. Love is a mystery, you are presenting the melifluent notes of this mystery in this poem. Liked it very much dear poet. Thank you. tony

Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it. Just one question: On line three, did you really mean HEROIN or did you mean HEROINE?

A golden thread still intact even when time, distance and pieces of paper say otherwise

It was certainly sincere at the time of writing, The jury's verdict on the prosecution - there are two guilty parties when a couple break down, many thanks

Rule of law: inherent duty on the Prosecution to prove the prisoner's guilt beyond a reasonable doubt. The poet actually proving his sincerity and trust in such committed and pure love in such smooth but intense poem. Well written and beautiful.

wow really beautiful that golden thread that never rusts its your trust that has held you both together till now hope you always will succeed in all your endeavours good write............ -10 anjali