A Golden Sphere Comments

A whole range of hues are seen, within this fiery glow, Changing as the hours pass by, it then starts sinking low, And if seen in splendid glory, is a wonderful imposing sight, Out to the west, where it disappears into our moonlit night what a lovey stanza of your rich poem is this one.. the poem is really written with a professional way and the idea is thoughtful.. deep and meaningful enough..well done dear poetess friend.. like your poetry..

A very inspiring and bright poem with perfect rhythm and rhyme, a real joy to read, recite and imagine..Thanks for sharing, Ernestine. A.

What a fantastic thought.Witnessing a full 24 hours watching the firmament and its changes.Weather permitting of course and shared with good company.Great poem Ernestine. Sid xx.

A beautiful choise of words perfectly arranged.... An outstandingly described enjoyable poem.

A wonderful poem, rich in colour. Andrew x

Your poem has been voted on 40 times (I've just added my '10') and no wonder. It's beautiful, Ernestine. Love, Fran xxx

Your poem is full of rich vocabulary and color. : -))

a beautiful write ernestine, well worded.

A beautiful and vivid Nature piece, teeming with brightness.

There is nothing like watching a sunrise or for that matter, a sunset! ... I noticed a typo in the last line. I believe 'is' should be 'it'? ... dan

something not quite blazing in this poem.

Sunrise, sunset - how quickly the days are gone. Sad, yet hopeful that that old sun will continue his journey.

A golden sphere Another beautiful observation of creation that clearly warms the heart! Excellent! .Pure! . Love Duncan

A vivid picture painted with the stroke of a poets pen Great Read Smiles Cookie

Thanks for the lovely glow.

Verse that warms! Uplifting lines, very enjoyable!

Il ike the warm Sun, nice read as well darling Love dave xxx

Very vivid Ernestine. I particularly like the flow of the rhyme in the first two lines of the second verse. For some reason I found them most relaxing. You're onto something here. Mood poetry!

warming and enjoyable...linda