Tuesday, November 11, 2008

A Golden Picture Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the frame beneath the glass a lover’s eyes of crystal blue shine
Pulling her closer to wings of flight
Breathless moments as finger tips softly trace a warm but cold silhouette
Dearest love of her night, the one never to forget
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Patricia Gale
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Chitra - 29 November 2008

your mind's quill sketched such a wonderful image showing the delicate side of your visage

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Michael Gale 24 November 2008

Love should take flight straight to Heavenly gates of the heart and thought... Love should soar to highest flights of delerious unawareness of the heart uncaught. Love can only carry us to hearted delight.... Love may burn deep within our blinded sight. At last we grasp that elusive feeling of love.... Like as a free bird flown up and all seeing from up high, way above. Free at last, free at last to live a great promised future and not of that of the past.... Love hath amassed, at last-amassed. Love and poems do inspire. Great poem patricia. God bless all poets-MJG.

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James Foulk 24 November 2008

a beautiful write by a beautiful lady with a heart that shines. you are one lady with a gift for poetry, this was a wonderful piece of poety. thank you for reading dreams reaching and for your comment

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 November 2008

Ammmmmazing imagery! nice composition! .....10+

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 November 2008

Trademark resplendence paints yet, another imagical pen-gem, a la Princess P. F j R

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Thad Wilk 11 November 2008

A lovely poem melancholy an sweet, a pleasure to read Patricia! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards, Fiend Thad

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Sandra Fowler 11 November 2008

You paint a golden word picture indeed. Lovely work. Warmest regards, Sandra

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