A Golden Memory Comments

Brought back many childhood memoriies, Terence, maybe not by painting the trees, but all the other majical things we did as kids. A good solid poem, Lynn.

Golden memory - This poem make me remember my father. But during me chidhood.i'not lucky.like a child in this poem. Smoke, dirty, sun yellow light, is blending good.: thumb: when we are saw yellow light, ? i'never saw.I'have saw sun alwys red in afternon.he.he.he *really great poem: thumb: : thumb:

For trying to make the tired world a better magical place. Thus were childhood dreamers often beaten into submission. By those who failed to see the divine presence in dreams. By those who failed to see the magical sparkle in dreams. Terence I liked your Golden Memory and the pain in the last two stanzas moved me a lot. Thanks for sharing it. Regards, Rehana

‘I painted the trees yellow bright golden yellow. /In all sad places I could short armed easily reach. ‘…actually you painted your psyche to be in tuned with somber trees a.k.a. Human being… ‘Divine presence’… ‘magical sparkle in dreams.’..Yeah magic of Divine Will …does wonder thaumaturgy magic…which ‘sighted-blind’ can’t view…thanks B-2 Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Awesome poem nice to read all through.

the last stanza pleases my soul....like a wind gallops my whole being....fascinating poem of revelation...God bless...a 10 +++

I love it! so sweet. sounds like something i would do! yellow is such a happy color! ~Tsunami

this is a very great great poem. You are really wonderful Terence George Craddock

A beautifully written poem! Sweet poetic write. Well done!

nice sweet poem my fav keep up writing i love ur poems just keep posting and ill keep reading love ya xoxoxoxoxo ellie

Indeed the sparkling young dreams are curtailed by elders! Otherwise the world will be full of beautiful wonderful as depicted in the poems! Nice dream!

We were great when we were child Now time has clouded our profile. CP

childhood memories are always sweet to share with...whatever you do there would have been mostly innocent deeds- perhaps understandable by the so called 'grown-ups'... good work...10

nicely done...memories are all we can keep...

I think this poem is one of best poems that i read..and thanks for your message..10+ Ramin

A beautiful poem full of innocence and nostalgia, very nicely penned! What a solace to paint to this tired world we think is great, with magical childhood dreams......For trying to make the tired world a better magical place......Thus were childhood dreamers....By those who failed to see....the divine presence in dreams......By those who failed to see.....the magical sparkle in dreams.. A REALLY GREAT POEM FROM A CHILD'S HEART! Deserves 10+