You embroidered my cloth of dreams
To an enlightened golden hue,
With your flamboyant conversations,
Which created a colourful tapestry, that was just you!
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Beautifully written Hazel...I hope writing this helped your grief to heal. Thanks for sharing!
A golden poem that is loaded with love and loss! Well done my friend!
A Fantastic write from your golden pen Hazel. Beautiful lines... The terrible pain and loss Of an exciting, loving and kind man, You leave behind the gift of your golden hue, As a beautiful reminder of you! Sweet memories left by a beautiful soul. I loved the flow of words and touching poem indeed.
A great write by a very talented lady. Wonderfully created similes. Well done, Hazel.
Deepest love poem from an evergreen lover as a gift and reminder- marvelous Hazel Durham
The terrible pain and loss Of an exciting, loving and kind man, You leave behind the gift of your! ...a great feeling. Excellent collocation.A beautiful poem I like most.........10
As a loving seal, Of your quest to lift forgotten flowers To their restored bloom on a carefree summer's day, Your untamed spirit quenched my parched thirst A beautiful poem....................10
Simply heartfelt your Golden words. Keep those incredible memories strong.
A beautiful life with a man who probed deep into your soul and gave wings to your dreams is vividly described with the use of striking imagery! After giving you golden memories to cherish and relish ever in life, he has left! But this departure hasn't saddened you as he has left eracable impressions in you! Great write Hazel! 10
What a poetic line! You leave behind the gift of your golden hue, As a beautiful reminder of you! Thanks for sharing here.