Tuesday, July 14, 2009

A Golden Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

A small golden cloud waited in the grayest sky,
waiting for the sun to rise and shine high.
It patiently waited for the light to conquer the darkness.
It silently prayed to be saved from being engorged by the nothingness.
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Tiya Sen
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Allemagne Roßmann 08 February 2010

by inch the dark monster creeped in, and like so many times before the little clouds prayers and hopes couldn't win. well said verses........10/10/10

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Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

a meaningful poem....written well....keep up the good job and write more...wel come to PH.........10

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