A Golden Cage. Comments

Supreme dialogue between the body and the soul superbly written in poetry with perfect rhyme, rhythm and simple words. A moral at the end concludes the poem very well. It contains the essence of your life time experience universalized so beautifully. I specially liked: 'When I was in the wood, I had the choice of my food. From the treetop I saw The sunrise with awe.' 'In my parrot's colony I had their best company. They kept me in cheers And saw, I shed no tears.'

A very good golden cage.A good coinicdence.I have also written one similar but different.I liked this

the way freedom was compared to the golden cage was beautiful... in the end... though the words were very expressive enough but the last paragraph stated the moral in a modest way....

A very wise and insightful poem written with beauty and great depth.Ten without hesitation. Kindest regards, Sandra

Very good. I find it difficult to express how this poem brings out my response, as i have difficulty expressing my response. Do you know what I mean? I like it, and look forward to reading other poems you've written. Thanks!