Thursday, February 18, 2010

A Gold Treasure Comments

Rating: 5.0

Health is a gift so value it.
Protect it and don't let it drift.
Health is a noble and valuable prize.
Don't waste it - preserve it - be wise.
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merna ibrahim
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 September 2010

‘Appetites of life are a lot.’ ~ Good thought …add life to life not days… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Merna Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Zeinab Sherif 22 July 2010

u r right health is a gold treasure so as ur unique absolutely interestin talent of writin poems & ur absolutely wonderful rose inside u....ur heart i give u 10+++++ & RAMADAN KAREEM

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so good, so wise, so nice... Bravo Merna, I loved your verses, indeed Health is the Golden Wealth. when the health is in decline the whole universe seems dark. we have to thank ALLAH for the boon of Health. ThanksForSharing Dear Sis.

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So true! Our health needs to be treasured, looked after. Without our health we have nothing. Meaningful poem. Lovely! ; D

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Marieta Maglas 01 March 2010

beautiful plea for health...very inspiring words of wisdom..

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Chitra - 24 February 2010

truly exemplifies the essence of the golden proverb...health is wealth.! ! a profound recipe for good health

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Wonderful words about a subject that is more valuable that money. Well done my friend!

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Romeo Della Valle 21 February 2010

Merna, you are right, a very well penned poem based in the truth, hoping our readers get the message, keep it up,10+++

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Ravi Sathasivam 20 February 2010

'Money is the silver treasure. Can be exchanged for something else. But your health is really golden treasure. It really is your inner wealth'..... Well penned poem with deep thought Its really the Golden treasure. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10++

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Mohammed Hassan 19 February 2010

well done merna i'm so proud of you, to realize that point it's good for you and thnx for sharing 10+++++

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Omar Ibrahim 19 February 2010

yes you are correct..then why don't you eat fruits and drink milk? ? : D thanks for sharing.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 19 February 2010

deep thoughts Dear Merna... Health is invaluable... Thank GOD for such a grace... a well penned poem 10+++++ ThanksForSharing WiseSister/

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 February 2010

Statutory advice Health is a gift so value it. Protect it and don't let it drift. Health is wealth yeah agreed--golden treasure.10/10 for the work.

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You did a fine job at writing this. well done.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 February 2010

rite..rite...rite.nothing is more valuable then health among earthly treausres...a good wise write........

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Afzal Shauq 18 February 2010

wow what a sweet golden treasure...money, appetite and health...wonderfully done this sweet poem with a good logic and meaningful way..after a long time I saw your new poem which is undoubtfully rich, charming and impressive enough..I enjoyed it a lot..well done..and it deserves 10++++++++++++++ points

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Angelica Ayman 18 February 2010

well done, , great poem thank's for charring 10++

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