A God, A Listener Poem by angel angel

A God, A Listener



Seven billion people pray to a thousand gods.
Is there a single one that can make these voices stop.
I say that i'm fine but my tree is drying
there won't be nothing left but i promise i'm trying.

Listen to my prayers that come from desperation.
I need an escape i'm waiting at the train station.
Remember the cold while we walked to your dorm?
Holding my hand in your pocket to keep me warm.

I used to listen to the sound of your heartbeat,
and now I pray for quiet as I walk down the street.
Telling me i'm yours and you're mine forever,
when we both know forever will one day mean never.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
idk how to make poems tbh i'm just trying to express myself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Freni Karaluthara 15 February 2024

much touched lines: I used to listen to the sound of your heartbeat, and now I pray for quiet as I walk down the street. Telling me i'm yours and you're mine forever,

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Freni Karaluthara 15 February 2024

I just wanted to say thank you for your words. They really spoke to me. I liked how you talked about praying and feeling desperate, and how sometimes it feels like nobody's listening.

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