Monday, April 27, 2009

A Gnat Comments

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I was tried, came and sat
Disturbance was caused to gnat
It bit me like a cat
Sucking my blood on the mat
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Monica kulal
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, aryaindia 27 April 2009

You have tried wonderfully at rhyming and it comes off smoothly.....good.......arya

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