Friday, November 9, 2012

A Glutton's Lament Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why did I have that last slice of cake
When I'd already eaten enough?
I'm doubled up now with acute tummy ache
And I'm feeling so horribly rough!
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Dawn Ferrett
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John Thorkild Ellison 02 December 2013

Very funny! ! I fully empathise! ! Wish I'd written this myself! !

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Adeline Foster 15 July 2013

Lovely, and such a bit of fun. Youngsters don't know what they're missing when they write only love-mush and love-loss. I do so enjoy your poetry. I'll even forgive that eighth line. Adeline

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Greg Davidson 23 November 2012

Inspiring, especially as i read this while eating that last slice of cake. I don't think i can wait til next week.

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Valerie Dohren 11 November 2012

Good luck with that then Dawn - no more cake for you. Good one.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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